GG5, etc.

GG5

Noun gloss.

@@ -9,2 +9,2 @@
-<lsource xml:lang="ger"/>
-<gloss>metamorphose</gloss>
+<lsource xml:lang="ger">Metamorphose</lsource>
+<gloss>metamorphosis</gloss>

ルミナス

Could be another sense, I guess.

@@ -16,0 +17 @@
+<gloss>mentality</gloss>

@@ -15,0 +16 @@
+<gloss>mental resolve</gloss>

see メンタルが強い/弱い
メンタルが壊れる
メンタルにくる
etc.

@@ -10 +9,0 @@
-<pos>&n;</pos>
@@ -12,0 +12,5 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<gloss>mental health</gloss>
+<gloss>mental state</gloss>
+</sense>

Also, we've used this approach on quite a few entries since the introduction of sK tags.

I don't think it's weird considering it only applies to one sense.

Having the "also written as 一国, 一克, 一剋" note as well as [sK] tags seems a little odd.

gg5, daij, meikyo

I think the note was fine. These forms are mentioned in the kokugos.
I don't think the x-ref is needed. The kokugos point from 一国 to 一刻.
According to meikyo, sense 2 is an adjective only.
I don't think sense 1 is used adverbially.

@@ -24 +24 @@
-<pos>&adv;</pos>
+<gloss>a moment</gloss>
@@ -26 +25,0 @@
-<gloss>moment</gloss>
@@ -31,2 +29,0 @@
-<pos>&n;</pos>
-<xref type="see" seq="1162530">一国・3</xref>
@@ -33,0 +31 @@
+<s_inf>also written as 一国, 一克, 一剋</s_inf>
@@ -35 +33 @@
-<gloss>hot-headed</gloss>
+<gloss>obstinate</gloss>

@@ -34 +33,0 @@
-<s_inf>also written as 一国, 一克, 一剋</s_inf>

yes, i think this makes more sense

daij, meikyo

On second thought, this is probably a better split. Sense 2 doesn't just have the "public ownership" meaning.

@@ -23 +23 @@
-<gloss>public (use, facility, etc.)</gloss>
+<gloss>public (use, matter, forum, etc.)</gloss>
@@ -27 +26,0 @@
-<pos>&adj-no;</pos>
@@ -30,2 +29,4 @@
-<gloss>public (matter, place, etc.)</gloss>
-<gloss>(out in the) open</gloss>
+<s_inf>as 公にする or 公になる</s_inf>
+<gloss>being public knowledge</gloss>
+<gloss>being out in the open</gloss>
+<gloss>exposure to public view</gloss>

Sense 2 is public in the 公共 sense, and sense 3 in the 表ざた sense.
I put "public place" with sense 3 because it's one of daijs's examples for that sense: "「―の場に持ち出す」". That seemed logical to me because a "public place" is simply somewhere in open view; it's not necessarily publicly *owned*, unlike a public facility.

@@ -21,0 +22,2 @@
+<xref type="ant" seq="2842390">私・わたくし・2</xref>
+<xref type="ant" seq="2842390">私・わたくし・2</xref>

the sense splitting seems odd here. should "public facility" (s2) and "public place" (s3) really be in different senses?

it seems like sense 3 should be reserved for "public" in the sense of "not secret"

whichever sense is intended to mean "not private(ly owned)" should xref to わたくし as an antonym

振りかけ	142418

@@ -3,0 +4,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>振りかけ</keb>
+</k_ele>

koj, daij, etc.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Furikake

gg5 has as two senses, i don't think it's really two

@@ -16,6 +16 @@
-<gloss>dried food sprinkled over rice</gloss>
-</sense>
-<sense>
-<pos>&n;</pos>
-<misc>&uk;</misc>
-<gloss>fish flour</gloss>
+<gloss>rice seasoning (usu. containing fish meal, seaweed, sesame, etc.)</gloss>

振り掛け	34843
振掛け	1471
ふりかけ	799424

@@ -14,0 +15 @@
+<misc>&uk;</misc>
@@ -18,0 +20 @@
+<misc>&uk;</misc>

Maybe it should be spelled out a bit. I don't think sense 2 is "col".

@@ -23,0 +24 @@
+<s_inf>neg. context, e.g. 全然反対</s_inf>
@@ -31,0 +33 @@
+<s_inf>pos. context, e.g. 全然いいよ</s_inf>

sense 1: zenzen ... nai

sense 2: zenzen chigau, zenzen dame (negative polarity words)

sense 3: zenzen ii, zenzen heiki, zenzen daijoubu

sense 3 is same as sense 2 but used with a positive word. it should be glossed the same. this usage is proscribed, so (col)

全然いいよ！ I'd translate as "that's 
totally fine!" but this usage is col, 
isn't it? shouldn't sense 2 be col-tagged?

171 Tanaka sentences, mostly sense 1. I couldn't see any for sense 3.

gg5, daijr

Adding sense.

@@ -18 +18,3 @@
-<gloss>not at all (with neg. verb)</gloss>
+<s_inf>with neg. sentence</s_inf>
+<gloss>(not) at all</gloss>
+<gloss>(not) in the slightest</gloss>
@@ -24,0 +27,7 @@
+<gloss>totally</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&adv;</pos>
+<misc>&col;</misc>
+<gloss>extremely</gloss>
+<gloss>very</gloss>

Better?

@@ -30 +30 @@
-<gloss>looking forward to</gloss>
+<gloss>longed-for</gloss>

待ちどうしい was given the reading まちどおしい

@@ -17,0 +18,2 @@
+<re_restr>待ち遠しい</re_restr>
+<re_restr>待遠しい</re_restr>
@@ -20,0 +23,4 @@
+</r_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>まちどうしい</reb>
+<re_inf>&ik;</re_inf>

N-grams

It's not really "io", and it's more common than 待遠しい.

@@ -11 +11 @@
-<keb>待遠しい</keb>
+<keb>待ちどうしい</keb>
@@ -14,2 +14 @@
-<keb>待ちどうしい</keb>
-<ke_inf>&io;</ke_inf>
+<keb>待遠しい</keb>

gg5

https://ejje.weblio.jp/content/入札者

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<gloss>tenderer</gloss>

gg5, daij

@@ -26 +26 @@
-<gloss>matter relating to oneself</gloss>
+<gloss>private matter</gloss>
@@ -30 +30 @@
-<gloss>secret</gloss>
+<gloss>personal secret</gloss>

G n-grams:
私事	437762
私ごと	 26482
しじ	347308
わたくしごと	39005

@@ -9,0 +10,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>私ごと</keb>
+</k_ele>
@@ -11,0 +15 @@
+<re_restr>私事</re_restr>

GG5 too.

Google N-gram Corpus Counts
╭─ーーーー─┬───────┬───────╮
│ ばさりと │ 3,458 │ 61.3% │
│ バサリと │ 2,185 │ 38.7% │
╰─ーーーー─┴───────┴───────╯

@@ -5,0 +6,3 @@
+</r_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>バサリ</reb>

nikk

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<reb>ばさりと</reb>
+<reb>ばさり</reb>
@@ -7,0 +8 @@
+<pos>&adv-to;</pos>

@@ -9 +9 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1361360">ふりかけ</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1361360">ふりかけ・1</xref>

Entry created

GG5

@@ -8,0 +9 @@
+<field>&med;</field>

Entry created

https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/鹿せんべい
https://www.city.hatsukaichi.hiroshima.jp/uploaded/attachment/24230.pdf

you're not allowed to feed the deer on miyajima

@@ -15 +15 @@
-<gloss>rice crackers for feeding the deer</gloss>
+<gloss>rice crackers for feeding the deer (in Nara)</gloss>

also miyajima.

@@ -15 +15 @@
-<gloss>rice crackers for feeding the deer (in Nara)</gloss>
+<gloss>rice crackers for feeding the deer</gloss>

鹿煎餅	3704
鹿せんべい	19443
しかせんべい	5366

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<keb>鹿煎餅</keb>
+<keb>鹿せんべい</keb>
@@ -8 +8 @@
-<keb>鹿せんべい</keb>
+<keb>鹿煎餅</keb>

Entry created

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<field>&cards;</field>

shorter and more correct.

@@ -13,2 +13 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="2826486">株札・かぶふだ・1</xref>
-<gloss>local card game (usu. a local version of hanafuda or kabufuda)</gloss>
+<gloss>local card game (esp. hanafuda)</gloss>

I'm sorry if I said that, or gave that impression, as we obviously do use abbreviations a lot. Apart from the obvious ones like "etc.", "i.e." and "e.g.", there are "usu." (457), "esp." (1977), "incl." (79), "var." (205), etc.
The Shorter OED has 4 pages of abbreviations at the front. Many are field tags, but it has a lot I wouldn't bother with. To me it's about saving display space. I see we have 14 cases of "oft." This is only one character shorter than "often", and I doubt it's needed.
I'll think about drafting something for the editorial policy.

I'm fine either way, but I distinctly 
remember you (Jim) telling me a good 
number of years ago in a comment that we 
only use such abbreviations in notes, and 
I've tried to adhere to that ever since. 
(there's a chance I'm misremembering, but 
I don't think I am). Might it be an idea 
to make a note of it in the policy 
document? The words we usually abbreviate 
and the ones we don't, etc.

Such abbreviations are fine in glosses. They're widely used in English lexicography. The main point is that they shorten the text (reducing paper/screen space) without making it harder to read.

@@ -14 +14 @@
-<gloss>local card game (usually a local version of hanafuda or kabufuda)</gloss>
+<gloss>local card game (usu. a local version of hanafuda or kabufuda)</gloss>

https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/タオ族
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yami_people
達悟族	60
タオ族	622

I can find no evidence that 達悟族 is actually read タオぞく, but I guess it's useful to  have it searchable here.

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<keb>達悟族</keb>
+<keb>タオ族</keb>
@@ -8 +8 @@
-<keb>タオ族</keb>
+<keb>達悟族</keb>
@@ -15,0 +16 @@
+<gloss>Tao people</gloss>

Wiki

I agree. Also, we have entries for these uses of バック and ハメ.

I agree with Rene that this isn't common enough to be worth including.

I wondered about "doggy style" as a gloss, but the images mostly show the "passive" partner on top. Anyway, not my, er, field of expertise.

@@ -11,0 +12 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="2537960">ハメ</xref>

i'm sure things have changed since the ngrams were compiled but this gets 25 google and 5 k-m

plus:
"In order to show you the most relevant results, we have omitted some entries very similar to the 57 already displayed.
If you like, you can repeat the search with the omitted results included."

this gloss is what the images suggest.  we have ハメ marked as vulg

see note above; i'm not sure this is worth recording as the meaning is pretty obvious from context and it does not seem to be particularly common

@@ -6,0 +7,3 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>バック・ハメ</reb>
+</r_ele>
@@ -9,2 +12,2 @@
-<misc>&col;</misc>
-<gloss>having sex with one's back turned away</gloss>
+<misc>&vulg;</misc>
+<gloss>fucking from behind (e.g. doggy style)</gloss>

Adult websites

No idea how to phrase this gloss

ＫＯＤ追加語彙
光脱毛	36165

Reading probably correct.

@@ -12 +12 @@
-<gloss>Intense Pulsed Light hair removal</gloss>
+<gloss>hair removal using pulsed light</gloss>

weblio https://ejje.weblio.jp/content/光脱毛

Reading is presumed. More info at https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/脱毛_(美容)#光脱毛(フラッシュ脱毛)

Must be split - different sources.

@@ -8,0 +9 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="2006930">バングラデシュ</xref>
@@ -12,5 +12,0 @@
-<sense>
-<pos>&n;</pos>
-<field>&music;</field>
-<gloss>bhangra (genre)</gloss>
-</sense>

https://twitter.com/search?f=tweets&vertical=default&q=バングラ
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/バングラ

目入れ	6327
WWW images.

I think just the action is better

@@ -12 +12 @@
-<gloss>drawing eyes (esp. on a daruma doll) to fulfill wishes</gloss>
+<gloss>drawing eyes (esp. on a daruma doll)</gloss>

実用日本語表現辞典 https://www.weblio.jp/content/目入れ

Probably obscure

Possibly not needed given that we have a sense for this use of 切れ.

Glossing as a noun.

@@ -12,2 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>out of energy</gloss>
-<gloss>out of strength</gloss>
+<gloss>running out of energy</gloss>
+<gloss>running out of strength</gloss>

エネルギー切れ	20035

https://dic.pixiv.net/a/エネルギー切れ

i would have thought maybe, but approx. 2000 to 300 ngrams in favour of 枳実

uk?

@@ -9,0 +10,4 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>キジツ</reb>
+<re_nokanji/>
+</r_ele>

Daijr: 生薬の一。ダイダイ・ナツミカン・ミカンなどの未熟果実を乾燥したもので、健胃薬に用いる。
GG5: 【生薬】 〔ダイダイ, ナツミカンの未熟な果実〕 dried immature orange.

I think this is more to the point.

@@ -12,2 +12 @@
-<gloss>immature orange (Aurantii fructus immaturus)</gloss>
-<gloss>dried orange used in Chinese traditional medicine</gloss>
+<gloss>dried immature orange (used in Chinese traditional medicine)</gloss>

https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/枳実
https://www.bing.com/search?q=Aurantii+fructus+immaturus&pc=MOZI&form=MOZCON

GG5

Split from 2842415 (different source.)

Maybe better alone.

@@ -9,0 +10 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1632420">ばさり</xref>

@@ -9,0 +10 @@
+<misc>&on-mim;</misc>

should perhaps be merged into ばさりと with a note

@@ -8,0 +9 @@
+<pos>&adv;</pos>

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<reb>ぱさりと</reb>
+<reb>ぱさり</reb>
@@ -8 +8 @@
-<pos>&adv;</pos>
+<pos>&adv-to;</pos>

nikk: 〘副〙 (多く「と」を伴って用いる) 「ばさり」よりやや小さい、あるいは軽い感じを表わす語。ぱさと。
ぱさりと	838

daijr: " 可能性の少ないものにかけて当てる。「ダービーで―・てた」"
prog: "試験で山を当てた He successfully anticipated what kind of questions would be asked on the exam."

I think Alan's gloss was a good translation of the dictionary definition. Daijr defines that sense of 山 as "〔②の鉱脈を探し当てるのは，きわめて確率の低い賭けであったことから〕万一の僥倖に賭けること。"
However, prog's example shows that it doesn't solely refer to betting.

@@ -14,0 +15,2 @@
+<gloss>to make a lucky hit</gloss>
+<gloss>to win against the odds</gloss>
@@ -16,2 +17,0 @@
-<gloss>to speculate successfully</gloss>
-<gloss>to succeed against the odds</gloss>
@@ -23 +23 @@
-<gloss>to discover a vein of ore in a mountain</gloss>
+<gloss>to strike a vein of ore</gloss>

I think this is closer.

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1302680">山・やま・6</xref>
@@ -13,0 +15,2 @@
+<gloss>to anticipate correctly</gloss>
+<gloss>to speculate successfully</gloss>

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<misc>&id;</misc>

daijr/s, nikk, chujiten, 斎藤和英大辞典

@@ -16,0 +17 @@
+<misc>&obsc;</misc>

daijr/s, nikk
跡をくらます	21
跡を暗ます	No matches
跡を晦ます	No matches

行方をくらます	4104
行方を暗ます	58
行方を晦ます	133

gg5, koj

Difficult to translate.
Moving "rustle" to the end. It doesn't fit with most of the examples.

@@ -10 +9,0 @@
-<gloss>with a rustle</gloss>
@@ -12,0 +12 @@
+<gloss>with a thud</gloss>
@@ -13,0 +14,2 @@
+<gloss>with a swish</gloss>
+<gloss>with a rustle</gloss>

GG5, 中辞典
ばさりと	3458
ばさり	5267
ばっさり	168272
ばさっと	11159

These ばさ../ばっさ... adverbs are all close, and the references are rather inconsistent as to meaning.