GG5 splits sense 1.

@@ -21,0 +22 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1740820">負け星・まけぼし</xref>

chujiten, daijr/s, prog

Aligning (2) with 負け星. I don't think "failure mark" is a commonly used expression.

All the above references differ in how they split the senses.

@@ -23 +23,8 @@
-<gloss>failure mark</gloss>
+<gloss>mark indicating a defeat</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<gloss>loss</gloss>
+<gloss>failure</gloss>
+<gloss>mistake</gloss>
+<gloss>faux pas</gloss>

@@ -22,1 +22,2 @@
-<gloss>failure mark (sumo)</gloss>
+<field>&sumo;</field>
+<gloss>failure mark</gloss>

A couple for sense 2.

Reopening so sentences can be indexed.

gg5, prog, daij

@@ -38,2 +38,21 @@
-<gloss>to act affected</gloss>
-<gloss>to keep up appearances</gloss>
+<gloss>to display</gloss>
+<gloss>to exhibit</gloss>
+<gloss>to put on show</gloss>
+<gloss>to arrange</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&v5r;</pos>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to mark (e.g. the day with a victory)</gloss>
+<gloss>to adorn (e.g. the front page)</gloss>
+<gloss>to grace (e.g. the cover)</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&v5r;</pos>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to affect (a manner)</gloss>
+<gloss>to keep up (appearances)</gloss>
+<gloss>to embellish</gloss>
+<gloss>to dress up</gloss>
+<gloss>to be showy</gloss>
+<gloss>to be pretentious</gloss>

大辞林 ②
大辞泉 ③

@@ -34,0 +35,6 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&v5r;</pos>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to act affected</gloss>
+<gloss>to keep up appearances</gloss>
+</sense>

辛く当たる	3829
辛くあたる	2390
つらく当たる	1805

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<keb>辛くあたる</keb>
+<keb>辛く当たる</keb>
@@ -8 +8 @@
-<keb>辛く当たる</keb>
+<keb>辛くあたる</keb>
@@ -18,0 +19 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1448810">当たる・12</xref>

A+B

@@ -9,0 +10,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>つらく当たる</keb>
+</k_ele>
@@ -13,0 +17 @@
+<pos>&exp;</pos>

@@ -26,0 +27 @@
+<s_inf>usu. お土産</s_inf>

@@ -28,0 +29 @@
+<gloss>disservice</gloss>

How about "disservice"?

How about this for sense 3? I'm not sure we even need that sense. It's just a sarcastic use of sense 1. Daijs is the only kokugo that has it. "Souvenir" and "present" can be used in the same way in English.
I don't think we need to include "good news" in sense 2. That's just one example of figurative usage. It can be anything positive.

@@ -23 +23 @@
-<gloss>present or good news brought by a visitor</gloss>
+<gloss>present brought by a visitor</gloss>
@@ -27 +27,2 @@
-<gloss>something perceived ironically or figuratively as a gift or souvenir</gloss>
+<gloss>something unpleasant that one is given (e.g. an illness while on vacation)</gloss>
+<gloss>unwelcome gift</gloss>

I can't think of a way of making Richard's 3rd sense more succinct.

@@ -24,0 +25,4 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<gloss>something perceived ironically or figuratively as a gift or souvenir</gloss>
+</sense>

daijr/s

Added kanji.

@@ -8,0 +9,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>富祐</keb>
+</k_ele>
@@ -14,0 +18 @@
+<pos>&n;</pos>
@@ -16 +19,0 @@
-<pos>&n;</pos>
@@ -18,0 +22 @@
+<gloss>affluence</gloss>

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<re_pri>spec1</re_pri>

gg5, prog

ふしゅ isn't uk. Splitting it out.

@@ -14,4 +13,0 @@
-<r_ele>
-<reb>ふしゅ</reb>
-<re_restr>浮腫</re_restr>
-</r_ele>
@@ -24,0 +21 @@
+<gloss>dropsy</gloss>

浮腫/むくみ - Koj, Daijr, GG5, GC
浮腫/ふしゅ - Koj, Daijr, GG5, 中辞典, GC
浮腫み/むくみ - 中辞典, Unidic (from 浮腫む)
むくみ(no kanji) - ルミナス

GG5 labels both むくみ and ふしゅ "医". The "Igaku" glossary uses the むくみ reading. GG5 simply points ふしゅ to むくみ. I think the whole entry should be "med" and kept as one.
As for "io", that was my first thought until I saw the 中辞典 and Unific entries. It's not really okurigana for むくみ so much as a masu stem of 浮腫む. It's all a bit bizarre as 浮腫/むくみ is probably a case of 義訓 so okurigana shouldn't come into it. On balance I'd go with "io".

@@ -8,0 +9 @@
+<ke_inf>&io;</ke_inf>
@@ -18,0 +20 @@
+<field>&med;</field>

Bulk update n-adv to n,adv
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -37 +37,2 @@
-<pos>&n-adv;</pos>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<pos>&adv;</pos>

Bulk update n-adv to n,adv
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -28 +28,2 @@
-<pos>&n-adv;</pos>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<pos>&adv;</pos>

Bulk update n-adv to n,adv
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -19 +19 @@
-<pos>&n-adv;</pos>
+<pos>&adv;</pos>

Unidic classifies as 名詞, 普通名詞, 副詞可能, -> Noun, Common Noun, Adverb-able

Added adverbial noun to be consistent with Unidic, and to help distinguish it from other あたり

@@ -18,0 +19 @@
+<pos>&n-adv;</pos>
@@ -26,0 +28 @@
+<pos>&n-adv;</pos>
@@ -33,0 +36 @@
+<pos>&n-adv;</pos>

避ける	1995108	99.3%
除ける	14993	0.7%

A messy entry.

@@ -9,0 +10 @@
+<ke_inf>&rK;</ke_inf>

chuujiten, wisdom

@@ -30,0 +31,2 @@
+<gloss>to evade (question, subject)</gloss>
+<gloss>to shirk (one's responsibilities)</gloss>

GG5 too.

大辞林 + 大辞泉

@@ -36,0 +37,7 @@
+<sense>
+<stagr>よける</stagr>
+<pos>&v1;</pos>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to put aside</gloss>
+<gloss>to move out of the way</gloss>
+</sense>

gg5, daijr

@@ -15,0 +16 @@
+<s_inf>with neg. verb</s_inf>
@@ -16,0 +18,2 @@
+<gloss>(not) in the least</gloss>
+<gloss>(none) whatsoever</gloss>

collision with the other さらさら, but probably [uk] since さらさらない is

@@ -14,0 +15 @@
+<misc>&uk;</misc>

Yes, I agree,

the 更々 entry just got a "with neg. verb" note and a "(not) in the least" gloss that makes this entry a little redundant

@@ -13,0 +14 @@
+<pos>&exp;</pos>

n-grams
更々ない	362
更更ない	No matches
さらさらない	2740
気はさらさらない	1069

eij has a <verb> + 気はさらさらない entry which might be worth adding

@@ -14,0 +15 @@
+<misc>&uk;</misc>

艶々	44089
艶艶	2787
つやつや	265200
ツヤツヤ	262232

Saw ツヤツヤヘア in an advertisement.

@@ -14,0 +15,4 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>ツヤツヤ</reb>
+<re_nokanji/>
+</r_ele>

KM ngrams:
つやつや	5066
艶々	706
艶艶	32

@@ -19,0 +20 @@
+<misc>&uk;</misc>

gg5

@@ -17,0 +17,1 @@
+<pos>&adv-to;</pos>
@@ -18,1 +19,1 @@
-<pos>&adv-to;</pos>
+<pos>&adj-no;</pos>

I'd never heard of a "banner year." I see it's AmE.

chujiten, eij
当たり年	91740
当り年	7501

@@ -7,0 +8,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>当り年</keb>
@@ -16 +19,4 @@
-<gloss>good or lucky year</gloss>
+<gloss>good year</gloss>
+<gloss>lucky year</gloss>
+<gloss>bumper year</gloss>
+<gloss>banner year</gloss>

GG5

Can't imagine why. It was like that in the source glossary for that entry, 20-odd years ago.

@@ -16 +16,2 @@
-<gloss>cloudy sky (weather)</gloss>
+<gloss>cloudy sky</gloss>
+<gloss>overcast sky</gloss>

Is the parenthetical necessary here? I'm not getting what else a cloudy sky could refer to.

gg5

@@ -15,2 +15,6 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1221760">気のない</xref>
-<gloss>to be uninterested</gloss>
+<pos>&adj-i;</pos>
+<s_inf>after a verb</s_inf>
+<gloss>not feeling like doing ...</gloss>
+<gloss>having no mind to ...</gloss>
+<gloss>being in no mood for ...</gloss>
+<gloss>having no intention of ...</gloss>
@@ -19,0 +24 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1221760">気のない</xref>
@@ -20,0 +26,2 @@
+<gloss>half-hearted</gloss>
+<gloss>dispirited</gloss>

Entry created

Google N-gram Corpus Counts
37,431	 65.4%	黄昏時
10,598	 18.5%	たそがれ時
 5,240	  9.2%	黄昏どき   <- adding
   114	  0.2%	黄昏ドキ   <- not adding
 3,864	  6.7%	たそがれどき

@@ -8,0 +9,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>黄昏どき</keb>

GG5 uses たそがれ時 in its example.

@@ -16,0 +17 @@
+<gloss>twilight</gloss>

黄昏時	37431
たそがれ時	10598
たそがれどき	3864

In some daijr definitions: https://kotobank.jp/gs/?q=たそがれ時

@@ -5,0 +6,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>たそがれ時</keb>

I think it's ok here. We'd need to revisit この方 if we change it.

この方 isn't an adverb in the kokugos. Does that matter or should we use adv for anything that's adverb-like?

@@ -14,0 +15 @@
+<pos>&adv;</pos>

生まれてこの方	49683
生まれてこのかた	46311

@@ -15 +15 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1663210">この方・このかた・1</xref>
+<gloss>since one's birth</gloss>
@@ -18 +17,0 @@
-<gloss>since one's birth</gloss>

@@ -5,0 +6,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>生まれてこのかた</keb>

Thanks for working on this. Not an easy one.

Reopening in case anyone wants to makes chances. I struggled with this one as well.

daijr/s

I think it's only 2 senses.
In the comments of another entry, we decided not to use expl glosses for describing usage.

@@ -5,0 +6,3 @@
+</r_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>でよ</reb>
@@ -13 +16,2 @@
-<gloss g_type="expl">calls attention to one's feelings or thoughts</gloss>
+<s_inf>used mainly by women</s_inf>
+<gloss>expresses a firm view or feeling</gloss>
@@ -18,6 +22,3 @@
-<gloss g_type="expl">indicates an order or command</gloss>
-</sense>
-<sense>
-<pos>&exp;</pos>
-<pos>&prt;</pos>
-<gloss g_type="expl">expresses a hope or wish</gloss>
+<s_inf>used to make casual requests or demands</s_inf>
+<gloss>please ...</gloss>
+<gloss>would you ...</gloss>

Koj: (接続助詞テに終助詞ヨの付いたもの) 命令・要求を表し、また単に詠嘆を表す。多く、女性・子供が使う。「秋風よ、心あらばつたへ―」(佐藤春夫)。「あれ買っ―」「本当によく似合っ―」

An attempt at translating the kokugo entries.

@@ -12 +12,12 @@
-<gloss>???</gloss>
+<pos>&prt;</pos>
+<gloss g_type="expl">calls attention to one's feelings or thoughts</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&exp;</pos>
+<pos>&prt;</pos>
+<gloss g_type="expl">indicates an order or command</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&exp;</pos>
+<pos>&prt;</pos>
+<gloss g_type="expl">expresses a hope or wish</gloss>

Daijr: (てよ entry. Its ってよ entry points to てよ)
（ 終助 ）
〔接続助詞「て」に終助詞「よ」の付いたものから。上に来る語の末尾が撥音「ん」の場合には「でよ」となる。また、形容詞の連用形に接続する時、「ってよ」の形となることがある。女性や子供の話し言葉に用いられる〕
1 念を押す気持ちを込めて、自分の考えを強く主張するのに用いられる。 「今日の貴女、とてもおきれいでいらし−」 「してくれなくても、よくっ−」
2 相手に対する依頼や希望を表す。 「かたづかないから早く起き−」 「ねえ、おもちゃ買っ−」 「はやく読んでよ」

I think this is probably worth an entry, but I'm struggling to put the Daijirin explanations into meaningful English.

@@ -5 +5,4 @@
-<reb>よろしくってよ</reb>
+<reb>てよ</reb>
+</r_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>ってよ</reb>
@@ -9 +12 @@
-<gloss>いいよ</gloss>
+<gloss>???</gloss>

http://www.ohno-shiki.co.jp/aboutus/haribako.html - 貼り箱（化粧箱）は、名前の通り、ベースとなる厚紙に、様々な色やデザインの紙（化粧紙）を貼って出来る箱です。ベースとなる厚紙は強度が強く、衝撃吸収性に優れています。すべて紙で作られているので、環境への負荷が小さく、地球に優しい容器です。
貼り箱	4873

@@ -16 +16 @@
-<gloss>rigid box</gloss>
+<gloss g_type="expl">rigid box of paper-coated cardboard</gloss>

https://howtobuypackaging.com/common-types-of-boxes/
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/貼箱
https://www.box-katou.co.jp/pasting

云云かんぬん	< 20
云々かんぬん	8606
うんぬんかんぬん	14760

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<keb>云云かんぬん</keb>
+<keb>云々かんぬん</keb>
@@ -8 +8 @@
-<keb>云々かんぬん</keb>
+<keb>云云かんぬん</keb>
@@ -14,0 +15,2 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1588630">云々・うんぬん・1</xref>
+<misc>&uk;</misc>

大辞林

@@ -11,4 +10,0 @@
-<reb>もえるゴミ</reb>
-<re_restr>燃えるゴミ</re_restr>
-</r_ele>
-<r_ele>
@@ -16 +11,0 @@
-<re_restr>燃えるごみ</re_restr>

@@ -19,0 +20 @@
+<pos>&n;</pos>

GG5, 中辞典
燃えるごみ	30138
燃えるゴミ	87016

Fairly obvious, but quite common. May as well have them both.

@@ -4,0 +5,3 @@
+<keb>燃えるゴミ</keb>
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
@@ -7,3 +10,4 @@
-<k_ele>
-<keb>燃えるゴミ</keb>
-</k_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>もえるゴミ</reb>
+<re_restr>燃えるゴミ</re_restr>
+</r_ele>
@@ -11,0 +16 @@
+<re_restr>燃えるごみ</re_restr>

https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=燃えるごみ

GG5, 中辞典
燃えないごみ	23089
燃えないゴミ	46946

Fairly obvious, but quite common. May as well have them both.

@@ -4,0 +5,3 @@
+<keb>燃えないゴミ</keb>
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
@@ -7,3 +10,4 @@
-<k_ele>
-<keb>燃えないゴミ</keb>
-</k_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>もえないゴミ</reb>
+<re_restr>燃えないゴミ</re_restr>
+</r_ele>
@@ -11,0 +16 @@
+<re_restr>燃えないごみ</re_restr>
@@ -14,0 +20 @@
+<pos>&n;</pos>

https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=燃えないごみ

絡み酒	2723

Trimming a lot.

@@ -12 +12 @@
-<gloss>type of drunken behavior that involves berating others, getting needlessly close, picking fights etc.</gloss>
+<gloss>drunken interaction (usu. unpleasant)</gloss>

https://uranaru.jp/topic/1049612
https://dic.pixiv.net/a/絡み酒

スリーパーホールド	8228
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sleeper_hold

@@ -6,0 +7,3 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>スリーパー・ホールド</reb>
+</r_ele>
@@ -8,0 +12,2 @@
+<field>&MA;</field>
+<gloss>sleeper hold</gloss>

https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/裸絞#名称と分類

Since it's mentioned in the クラスマッチ Wiki page, along with スポーツ大会 which is already an entry, probably best to have all 3. The school context is not obvious.

@@ -12 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>ball game day (held in middle and high school)</gloss>
+<xref type="see" seq="2842286">クラスマッチ</xref>
+<gloss>school inter-class ball-game competition</gloss>

118333 ngrams

although very common, it seems a little obvious, so without a more natural english translation than "ball game day", i'd probably just let it slide

https://idobataus.com/english-sportsday/
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/クラスマッチ

GG5, https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/極技
極め技	1956
極技	2430

possibly MA tag also

サブミッション	23522
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/サブミッション
Eijiro: ブラジリアン柔術っていうのは武道の一形態で、サブミッション・ホールドと関節固めがあって…… : Brazilian Jiujitsu is a form of martial arts, where it's submission holds and joint locks ....

The Wiki page mentions サブミッション・ホールド too. Possibly another entry.

Fixed all 9 sentences.

koj, daij.  only gg5 has 辺り, although my IME offers it.  uk in any case, i think

splitting as suggested

could be in two senses.  i think this (as in meikyo, which glosses it to mean "side" but gives all its exampled as waterbodies) captures them both.  also means roadside, etc.

Daijr has three senses, and all use examples from the 源氏物語. I'd stick with "arch".

koj, daij, shimeikai, meikyo (marks as 〔古〕), oubunsha kogo jiten

perhaps not archaic, but obs?

could be merged with あたり as [ok] and some restrictions, but it would be a little messy