@@ -17 +17 @@
-<gloss>lively group (usu. young people)</gloss>
+<gloss>lively group (esp. of young people)</gloss>
@@ -22 +22,2 @@
-<gloss>group (art)</gloss>
+<field>&art;</field>
+<gloss>group</gloss>

gg5
daijr: " 絵画・彫刻などで，多くの人間の集団的行動を主題として描いたもの"

Not necessarily a sculpture.

@@ -22 +22 @@
-<gloss>sculptured group (art)</gloss>
+<gloss>group (art)</gloss>

Not always young.

@@ -17 +17,2 @@
-<gloss>lively group of young people</gloss>
+<gloss>lively group (usu. young people)</gloss>
+<gloss>dynamic bunch</gloss>

gg5 daijr

@@ -16 +16,6 @@
-<gloss>sculptured group</gloss>
+<xref type="see" seq="2048090">青春群像</xref>
+<gloss>lively group of young people</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<gloss>sculptured group (art)</gloss>

meikyo

@@ -16,0 +17,2 @@
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<pos>&vi;</pos>
@@ -22,0 +25,2 @@
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<pos>&vi;</pos>

I don't think we need a "dose" gloss. That's a specific case.

@@ -17 +17,2 @@
-<gloss>loss in weight, esp. body weight</gloss>
+<gloss>loss in weight (esp. body weight)</gloss>
+<gloss>weight reduction</gloss>
@@ -23,2 +24 @@
-<gloss>reducing quantity</gloss>
-<gloss>reducing doses</gloss>
+<gloss>reduction of quantity</gloss>

OK.

I think this division is comfortable for the reader, as the first sense is more 
common and precise than the second one (all the related examples from 
the TC are also about the first sense) ; then the v-s in the first sense is 
usually intransitive while the second vs is often transitive. (see the 
examples above)

I guess you are referring to the following on that Wikp disambiguation page: "日本の刑務所の受刑者による肛門性交で、女役を指す隠語。" If so, I think this sense belongs in entry 2526360, not here. I'll propose it there and if it's accepted I'll delete it here.

http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/あんこ

@@ -31,0 +32,5 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<misc>&sl;</misc>
+<gloss>person who temporarily takes on a female role while incarcerated in a disciplinary establishment</gloss>
+</sense>

Fair enough. (I find it hard to think of the filling in a 肉饅頭 as "あんこ".)

@@ -25 +24,0 @@
-<misc>&sl;</misc>

Is sense #2 really slang?
I think its use in the lead sentence of the Wikipedia article 餡 suggests that it's not slang:
餡（あん）あるいは餡子（あんこ）とは、肉・野菜・豆類・芋類などを用いた餅や饅頭などの中身に入れる具のことである。
.
GG5: 〔詰め物〕 stuffing; padding.
- 座布団が破れて綿のあんこが出てきた. The cushion was torn and its stuffing came out.
- 日本髪を結うためにあんこで形を整えた. Padding was used to give shape to a traditional Japanese (woman's) hairstyle

@@ -27,0 +28,5 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<gloss>stuffing</gloss>
+<gloss>padding</gloss>
+</sense>

@@ -23 +23 @@
-<gloss>putting something into production</gloss>
+<gloss>putting into production</gloss>

I think at least sense 1 is both vt and vi? unsure about the 2nd one

@@ -12,0 +13,2 @@
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<pos>&vi;</pos>
@@ -18,0 +21 @@
+<pos>&vt;</pos>

Daijr (2. ある製品を、機械制工業によって生産しうるようにすること。)

This is a distinct sense in 大辞林, and there has been discussion on the Honyaku group on its translation.

@@ -15,0 +16,6 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<pos>&vs;</pos>
+<gloss>establishing a production system</gloss>
+<gloss>putting something into production</gloss>
+</sense>

N-grams, Daijr, GG5, etc.

I think the term is neutral.

@@ -7,0 +8,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>役まわり</keb>
@@ -18 +21 @@
-<gloss>(unpleasant) duty</gloss>
+<gloss>duty</gloss>

Daijr, GG5, etc. G n-grams:
脇道	113425
わき道	57553
傍道	101
わきみち	1028
脇路	201

@@ -8,0 +9,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>脇路</keb>
@@ -21 +24,5 @@
-<gloss>digression</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<pos>&adj-no;</pos>
+<gloss>digression (e.g. from argument)</gloss>

@@ -8,0 +9,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>傍道</keb>

daijr

I don't think the archaic "rounds" sense is needed. Even daijs and koj don't have it.

@@ -30 +30 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1002120">お巡りさん</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1002120">おまわりさん</xref>
@@ -31,0 +32 @@
+<misc>&col;</misc>
@@ -33 +34 @@
-<gloss>policeman</gloss>
+<gloss>police officer</gloss>
@@ -42,0 +44 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1762090">女房言葉</xref>
@@ -44,9 +46,2 @@
-<gloss>rounds (doctor, police beat, etc.)</gloss>
-</sense>
-<sense>
-<pos>&n;</pos>
-<xref type="see" seq="1588930">おかず・1</xref>
-<xref type="see" seq="1762090">女房言葉</xref>
-<misc>&uk;</misc>
-<misc>&arch;</misc>
-<gloss>vegetables that accompany rice (secret language of court ladies)</gloss>
+<s_inf>secret language of court ladies</s_inf>
+<gloss>side dish (eaten with rice)</gloss>

@@ -14,0 +15 @@
+<ke_inf>&sK;</ke_inf>
@@ -17,0 +19 @@
+<ke_inf>&sK;</ke_inf>
@@ -20,0 +23 @@
+<ke_inf>&sK;</ke_inf>

OK

@@ -39,5 +38,0 @@
-<pos>&exp;</pos>
-<misc>&pol;</misc>
-<gloss>(please) go around</gloss>
-</sense>
-<sense>

I don't think we need sense 3. It's just an abbreviation of お巡りください. We don't have similar senses on other entries.

GG5

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<gloss>gender ratio</gloss>

Koj, Daijr, Denshi, etc.

@@ -6,0 +7,3 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>キャブタイヤ・ケーブル</reb>
+</r_ele>
@@ -9 +12 @@
-<gloss>cab-tyre cable</gloss>
+<gloss>cabtyre cable</gloss>
@@ -10,0 +14 @@
+<gloss g_type="expl">rubber-sheathed multi-core cable</gloss>

https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/キャブ%E
3%82%BF%E3%82%A4%E3%83%A4%E3%82%B1%E3%83%BC%E3%83%96%E3%83%
AB
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flexible_cable

@@ -9,0 +10 @@
+<gloss>flexible cable</gloss>

Entry created

See comment on 1610570.

@@ -19,0 +20,6 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<xref type="see" seq="2828312">女役・3</xref>
+<s_inf>prison slang</s_inf>
+<gloss>passive role in a male homosexual relationship</gloss>
+</sense>

Whew.

on 2nd thought, according to daijs it belongs in an entry for 鮟鱇[あんこ].  see note there

@@ -20,7 +19,0 @@
-<sense>
-<pos>&n;</pos>
-<xref type="see" seq="2035180">あんこ型</xref>
-<xref type="see" seq="2035180">あんこ型</xref>
-<gloss>potbellied sumo wrestler</gloss>
-<gloss>wrestler with a big belly</gloss>
-</sense>

see comment on 2809630.  shinmeikai merges.  no reason to keep separate, i think (though gg5 does)

merge

@@ -15 +15,2 @@
-<s_inf>Tohoku, Hokkaido</s_inf>
+<dial>&thb;</dial>
+<dial>&hob;</dial>
@@ -18,0 +20,6 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<xref type="see" seq="2035180">あんこ型</xref>
+<gloss>potbellied sumo wrestler</gloss>
+<gloss>wrestler with a big belly</gloss>
+</sense>

Indeed.

The verb 上げる conjugates as a v1 verb.

@@ -12 +12 @@
-<pos>&v5s;</pos>
+<pos>&v1;</pos>
@@ -18 +18 @@
-<pos>&v5s;</pos>
+<pos>&v1;</pos>

Not sure it's two senses.

@@ -14 +14 @@
-<gloss>referee signalling the winner of a match by raising his fan towards the winner</gloss>
+<gloss>to signal the winner of a match (by the referee raising his fan towards the winner)</gloss>

http://dictionary.goo.ne.jp/jn/65733/meaning/m0u/

相撲で、行司が勝ったほうの力士を軍配団扇 (うちわ) で指し示す。転じて試合や競
争などで、勝利・優勢の判定を下す。

陶芸用語大辞典

@@ -5,0 +6,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>扁壷</keb>
@@ -12 +15 @@
-<gloss>gong-shaped bottle used as a flask for transporting sake</gloss>
+<gloss>circular flat stoneware flask</gloss>

daijs
http://www.asahibeer-oyamazaki.com/collection/011.html

OK, although I think 大辞泉 is a bit of an outlier here. Where I have seen 揺すり it's always been the masu-stem of 揺する in the "shake" sense. Best tag it as "iK".

@@ -11,0 +12 @@
+<ke_inf>&iK;</ke_inf>

If you look at the daijisen entry, it seems to also apply (http://dictionary.goo.ne.jp/jn/225327/meaning/m0u/). 

IMO, it comes from 揺する, to shake, like the English word "shakedown". 強請 is a kind of ateji that was applied after the fact.

@@ -8,0 +9,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>揺すり</keb>

N-grams

揺すり does not mean that (read the 大辞林 entry.)

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<keb>揺すり</keb>
+<keb>強請り</keb>
@@ -9,3 +8,0 @@
-</k_ele>
-<k_ele>
-<keb>強請り</keb>
@@ -17,0 +15,2 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1578060">強請・きょうせい</xref>
+<misc>&uk;</misc>
@@ -23,0 +23 @@
+<misc>&uk;</misc>

gg5 daij

@@ -19 +19 @@
-<gloss>mat for laying offerings during the Bon festival</gloss>
+<gloss>altar mat for laying out offerings during the Bon festival</gloss>

daijr koj

GG5, Eijiro, リーダーズ+プラス

@@ -12 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>female role</gloss>
+<gloss>female role (e.g. in film)</gloss>
+<gloss>female part</gloss>
@@ -20 +21,2 @@
-<gloss>female role in a homosexual relationship</gloss>
+<misc>&sl;</misc>
+<gloss>passive role in a male homosexual relationship</gloss>

daij google

@@ -12 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>reed (part of a loom)</gloss>
+<gloss>reed (in a loom)</gloss>
+<gloss>yarn guide</gloss>

gg5 daijj http://www.tochigi-edu.ed.jp/furusato/detail.jsp?p=65&r=393 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reed_(weaving)

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matteuccia_orientalis
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pentarhizidium
GG5 - calls it Matteuccia orientalis, but that seems to be a former name.

@@ -17 +17 @@
-<gloss>Oriental Ostrich fern (Pentarhizidium orientale)</gloss>
+<gloss>Oriental ostrich fern (Pentarhizidium orientale)</gloss>

@@ -11,0 +12 @@
+<re_nokanji/>

wiki

Good suggestion.

I'd use "species of X" where X is as specific as possible
and don't forget the [nokanji]

@@ -11,0 +12 @@
+<re_nokanji/>
@@ -16 +17 @@
-<gloss>Adiantum monochlamys</gloss>
+<gloss>Adiantum monochlamys (species of maidenhair fern)</gloss>

http://eol.org/pages/6122291/names/common_names wiki gg5

btw maidenhair fern is just the genus, but we could call it "type of maidenhair fern". Maybe that's the solution for all these nameless ferns.

Koj, kanjipedia, and jitenon use a comma. Daijr/s and sankoku do not.

https://github.com/JMdictProject/JMdictIssues/issues/122
Adding commas to readings to align with kanji forms.

@@ -8,0 +9 @@
+<ke_inf>&sK;</ke_inf>
@@ -11 +12 @@
-<reb>はなはさくらぎひとはぶし</reb>
+<reb>はなはさくらぎ、ひとはぶし</reb>

OK

@@ -17 +17 @@
-<gloss>as the cherry blossom is first among flowers, so is the samurai first among men</gloss>
+<gloss>as the cherry blossom is first among flowers, so is the warrior first among men</gloss>

I might replace "samurai" with "warrior"

@@ -3,0 +4,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>花は桜木、人は武士</keb>
+</k_ele>

ルミナス

Read as "花は桜木、人は武士".

@@ -13,0 +14 @@
+<gloss>as the cherry blossom is first among flowers, so is the samurai first among men</gloss>

daijs and daijr via kotobank

GG5: a patriarch. ▲patriarchal, patriarchic adj.
家父長	9224
家父長の	496
家父長的	4610

I agree, not a strong case.

@@ -13,5 +12,0 @@
-</sense>
-<sense>
-<pos>&adj-na;</pos>
-<gloss>patriarchal</gloss>
-<gloss>patriarchic</gloss>

not seeing evidence for sense 2 in kokugos nor gg5

gg5 web

@@ -15,0 +16 @@
+<misc>&arch;</misc>
@@ -16,0 +18 @@
+<gloss>rest</gloss>

I think you're right.

@@ -4,3 +3,0 @@
-<k_ele>
-<keb>御寝る</keb>
-</k_ele>

Koj, Daijr

I think this conflates two terms: the 四段 verb 御寝る and the nouns 御寝 and 御夜. It needs to be split. Both are "arch" and "pol", I think rather than "hon".

daijr koj

daij koj

Trimming

@@ -13 +13 @@
-<gloss>traditional Japanese candy eaten during the summer (gelatin cubed covered in brown sugar)</gloss>
+<gloss>traditional Japanese summer candy</gloss>

http://recipe.rakuten.co.jp/recipe/1420007327/
daijr koj

@@ -14 +14 @@
-<gloss>side (one's)</gloss>
+<gloss>(one's) side</gloss>

koj daijr

Eij

wiki

wiki gg5 daijr koj

daijr koj

ＫＯＤ追加語彙, リーダーズ+プラス, G n-grams:
運転室	43169
運転台	84252

Daijr, GG5, etc. WWW images

Most images are of carburettors.