gg5

Not adj-no.

@@ -16 +15,0 @@
-<pos>&adj-no;</pos>
@@ -18 +17,2 @@
-<gloss>inhalation</gloss>
+<gloss>inhalation (of air)</gloss>
+<gloss>inhaled air</gloss>
@@ -22 +21,0 @@
-<pos>&adj-no;</pos>

oops.  didn't mean to actually merge

@@ -8,3 +8,0 @@
-</k_ele>
-<k_ele>
-<keb>給気</keb>

koj, daij, etc.

sense 2 is limited, i think.  also i think it overlaps with 給気, which might be merged in here.  shinmeikai merges with restrictions

@@ -8,0 +8,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>給気</keb>
@@ -17,0 +20,1 @@
+<xref type="ant" seq="1266460">呼気</xref>
@@ -22,1 +26,2 @@
-<gloss>intake</gloss>
+<xref type="ant" seq="1472320">排気</xref>
+<gloss>intake (e.g. of air)</gloss>

daijs, prog, Luminous, 研究社 新和英中辞典

@@ -17,1 +17,6 @@
-<gloss>inspiration</gloss>
+<gloss>inhalation</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<pos>&adj-no;</pos>
+<gloss>intake</gloss>

nikk, meikyo

not an [exp], i think

It's in GG5, 中辞典 and Eijiro, so I thought it was common. I'll demote it, and add Eijiro's "honeyed phrase"
The expl was largely from GG5; I'll trim it.

@@ -19,1 +19,0 @@
-<gloss>telling phrase</gloss>
@@ -22,1 +21,3 @@
-<gloss g_type="expl">phrase that clinches things or brings someone around, esp. in personal relationships</gloss>
+<gloss>honeyed phrase</gloss>
+<gloss>telling phrase</gloss>
+<gloss g_type="expl">phrase that brings someone around, esp. in personal relationships</gloss>

is "telling phrase" really used in this sense, in English? I 
can't find any evidence for it on google. 
also, is the expl not overdoing it a little?

Daijr (男女の間で，相手の心を強く引きつけるような巧みな言葉), GG5, 新和英中辞典, ルミナス, ＫＯＤ追加語彙

Fleshing it out.

@@ -15,0 +15,1 @@
+<pos>&exp;</pos>
@@ -16,0 +17,3 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1276480">口説き文句・くどきもんく</xref>
+<gloss>telling phrase</gloss>
+<gloss>clincher</gloss>
@@ -17,0 +21,1 @@
+<gloss g_type="expl">phrase that clinches things or brings someone around, esp. in personal relationships</gloss>

GG5: 〔仮の[内々の]決定〕 (a) 「tentative [private] decision; 〔非公式の決定〕 (an) 「unofficial [informal] decision; (an) informal settlement; 〔就職の〕 a (tentative) job offer; an 「informal [unofficial] promise of employment.
中辞典: 	(an) informal [unofficial] decision; 〈採用の〉 informal acceptance for employment
ルミナス: (非公式の決定) unofficial [informal] decision [C]; (就職の) promise of employment [C], informal employment contract [C]; (相手先からの仕事の申し出) job offer [C].

I think it's basically correct. Maybe the order should change.

@@ -19,0 +20 @@
+<gloss>tentative decision</gloss>
@@ -21 +22 @@
-<gloss>tentative decision</gloss>
+<gloss>informal offer</gloss>

Eijiro has
内定をもらう
get an official job offer
be made an offer

I don't think unofficial is right

Meikyo vt and vi additions to n,vs entries
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -16,0 +17,2 @@
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<pos>&vi;</pos>

@@ -17,2 +17,2 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1822790">本決り</xref>
-<xref type="see" seq="1822790">本決り</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1822790">本決まり</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1822790">本決まり</xref>

shinmeikai

@@ -17,0 +17,1 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1822790">本決り</xref>

ritsuryo conversion
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -34 +34 @@
-<gloss>3rd grade official (ritsuryo system)</gloss>
+<gloss>3rd grade official (ritsuryō system)</gloss>

daij, koj

I don't think ほうがん applies to sense 1.

@@ -25 +24,0 @@
-<stagr>ほうがん</stagr>

no, i just knew that this edit would take some time to check over...  there are multiple writings of じょう in this sense and i wanted to make sure that this was right.  seems fine

I've removed the Minamoto-no-Yoshitsune nickname sense, in case that's been blocking approval. There was already a 判官/はんがん surname entry in Enamdict, and I've added the nickname there.

@@ -39,7 +39,0 @@
-<sense>
-<stagr>はんがん</stagr>
-<stagr>ほうがん</stagr>
-<pos>&n;</pos>
-<s_inf>nickname</s_inf>
-<gloss>Minamoto-no-Yoshitsune (1159-1189.6.15)</gloss>
-</sense>

OK

meikyo, daijs, wiki support the kanji addition for ちょうな.  nikk also supports it for ておの.

dictionary defs definitely support 'adze' pretty much exclusively here, but there's no question that web hits go the other way

@@ -10,0 +10,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>釿</keb>
+</k_ele>
@@ -16,0 +19,1 @@
+<re_restr>釿</re_restr>

Daijr, GG5, 新和英中辞典, etc.

Refs show both meanings, and the bias in the reading/meaning sets, but there is overlap.
For 手斧 Google images mostly shows hatchets, and a few adzes. (I've known the word "adze" as long as I remember. I don't think it needs to be explained.)
As for 釿, I can find no evidence of it being read ておの or ちょうな. Was it in curatorial note saying "釿 (ておの)"? If so it was more likely saying what the kanji means rather than giving its reading. 釿, which means hatchet, only has the ON readings of キン and ギン (according to the kanwas.)

@@ -10,3 +10,0 @@
-<k_ele>
-<keb>釿</keb>
-</k_ele>
@@ -19,1 +16,0 @@
-<re_restr>釿</re_restr>
@@ -23,0 +19,6 @@
+<s_inf>esp. ておの</s_inf>
+<gloss>hatchet</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<s_inf>esp. ちょうな</s_inf>
@@ -24,1 +26,1 @@
-<gloss g_type="expl">axe-like tool with blade perpendicular to handle</gloss>
+<gloss>adz</gloss>

ja:WP en:WP
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/釿
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adze

* Add kanji (釿)
* Add explanation, b/c “adze” is unfamiliar.
Saw at museum, using this kanji.
(First use of this kanji in JMdict!) (probably only ever)

@@ -10,0 +10,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>釿</keb>
+</k_ele>
@@ -16,0 +19,1 @@
+<re_restr>釿</re_restr>
@@ -20,0 +24,1 @@
+<gloss g_type="expl">axe-like tool with blade perpendicular to handle</gloss>

@@ -13,0 +14 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1692860">投錨</xref>

Meikyo vt and vi additions to n,vs entries
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<pos>&vi;</pos>

研究社 新和英中辞典, Cross, Luminous

@@ -13,0 +13,1 @@
+<gloss>weighing anchor</gloss>

ngrams

@@ -4,3 +4,0 @@
-<k_ele>
-<keb>本決り</keb>
-</k_ele>
@@ -11,0 +8,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>本決り</keb>

shinmeikai

@@ -22,0 +22,1 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1458920">内定</xref>

strange that 止 is only in gg5 and shinmeikai

Daijr, GG5, Unidic/ngrams.

@@ -4,0 +4,9 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>留男</keb>
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>止男</keb>
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>止め男</keb>
+</k_ele>
@@ -13,1 +22,4 @@
-<gloss>arbitrator</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<gloss>arbitrator (esp. in a play)</gloss>

daijs

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<gloss>local strongman</gloss>

Daijr, GG5, 新和英中辞典, etc.

All the refs say it's a powerful clan (I see that in Chinese it means despot.)

@@ -12,1 +12,1 @@
-<gloss>local clan</gloss>
+<gloss>powerful local clan</gloss>

gg5 has a full entry for it, eok

seems mostly fine to me

@@ -14,0 +14,1 @@
+<gloss>to want to hear</gloss>

聞きたい＋がる If you keep this, it should be expanded.

Entry created

Trimming a little.

@@ -22 +22 @@
-<s_inf>auxiliary verb indicating the causative</s_inf>
+<s_inf>aux. verb indicating the causative</s_inf>
@@ -30 +30 @@
-<s_inf>auxiliary verb indicating that one has been granted the permission to do something</s_inf>
+<s_inf>aux. verb indicating the granting of permission</s_inf>
@@ -37 +37 @@
-<s_inf>auxiliary verb used as an honorific for others' actions</s_inf>
+<s_inf>aux. verb used as an honorific for others' actions</s_inf>

@@ -22 +22,4 @@
-<gloss g_type="expl">auxiliary verb indicating the causative</gloss>
+<s_inf>auxiliary verb indicating the causative</s_inf>
+<gloss>to let</gloss>
+<gloss>to allow</gloss>
+<gloss>to cause</gloss>
@@ -27 +30,2 @@
-<gloss g_type="expl">auxiliary verb indicating that one has been granted the permission to do something</gloss>
+<s_inf>auxiliary verb indicating that one has been granted the permission to do something</s_inf>
+<gloss>to be permitted to</gloss>
@@ -32 +36,3 @@
-<gloss g_type="expl">auxiliary verb used as an honorific for others' actions</gloss>
+<misc>&hon;</misc>
+<s_inf>auxiliary verb used as an honorific for others' actions</s_inf>
+<gloss>to do</gloss>

Fair enough.

if no editor has any idea what "more active" means, we can't 
expect the users to do either

@@ -23 +22,0 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="2568020">させる・1</xref>
@@ -30 +28,0 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="2568020">させる・2</xref>
@@ -32,7 +29,0 @@
-</sense>
-<sense>
-<pos>&aux-v;</pos>
-<pos>&v5s;</pos>
-<xref type="see" seq="2568020">させる・3</xref>
-<xref type="see" seq="2568020">させる・3</xref>
-<gloss g_type="expl">auxiliary verb used to make verbs more "active"</gloss>

sitting for months with no changes.  closing

GG5, Daijr, Ngrams

OK.

That seems good, at least for now. :-)
If I find out anything different, I'll let you know.

Yes, I read the Proz articles, and noted they were a bit contradictory. Let's settle on the above, which is suitably vague.

@@ -12,1 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>orientation for prospective employees</gloss>
+<gloss>presentation of employment offer</gloss>
+<gloss>orientation occasion for prospective employees</gloss>

I'm not sure. I'm doing a related translation at the moment and I may have a clearer idea 
when I'm finished. I'll come back to comment in another day or so. Here are some quotes from 
the proz.com page I quoted previously. (Did you read them already?)
.
In Japan, 内定means you are selected to be hired, but it is not final or official yet, but you 
are most likely hired for the job for sure though. I would say "Presentation of tentative 
employment" or "Presentation of unofficial employment presentation" . I hope this will help 
you.
.
Ceremony for commitment of employment
Explanation: 内定commitment [by an employer] of employment [of a prospective employee]
.
It [i.e. the word "ceremony] sounds too awkward in English environment. The company invites 
those new recruits to get acquainted to the company environement and get to know their new 
employer, its leaders, its workplace etc., in which they start working soon. This can happen 
in non-corporate situation and organizations as well as some companies. Then it is a party, 
not a ceremony.
.
内定式
Welcoming Party for Next FY's Recruiting Finalists
.
内定式
Employment Candidate Orientation
Explanation: Since they are not definite hires, they can be considered employment candidates. 
Also, the word "orientation" describes the process of the candidate and company getting to 
know each other, while leaving room for interpretation in cases where the event is very 
casual, such as a party.
Peer comment: Agree. This term is used in my company.

ＫＯＤ追加語彙 has the following long gloss:
"a job offer [an offer-of-employment] ceremony; the ceremony at which 「an employer makes a candidate a job offer and the candidate confirms his or her intention to take it [employer and candidate make an undertaking that the candidate will join the company]."
Daijr: "企業の新卒採用活動において，内々定を出した学生を集めて内定通知を渡すイベント。普通，10 月 1 日に実施する。内定者や社員による懇親会なども行われる。"

Those quotes above indicate it's a bit more than an orientation event, although that's part of it.
How about "offer-of-employment and orientation ceremony for prospective employees"?

787 ngrams

@@ -13,2 +13,2 @@
-<xref type="see">特定非営利活動団体（法人）</xref>
-<gloss>Nonprofit Organization (NPO)</gloss>
+<gloss>nonprofit organization</gloss>
+<gloss>NPO</gloss>

http://kidsbase.jp/?p=1244
https://www.npo-homepage.go.jp/portalsite/attention_170218.html
http://www.chiba-npo.jp/manual/pdf/manual-17.pdf

as best as i can tell, "特定非営利活動団体（法人）" gets zero legitimate google hits.  "特定非営利活動団体法人" gets 54.  given that the meaning of 法人 is obvious, i think the shorter entry should suffice

See my previous entry

Maybe there is a way to merge the entry for this expression with that for the shorter expression i submitted just before this one?

I agree it'd not necessary or useful. 疾風怒濤 gets 38k hits in the ngrams, and 嵐と衝動 gets 49.

76 google hits (49 ngrams)

all the hits i see are used to give a literal japanese meaning to the phrase "シュトゥルム・ウント・ドラング".  i don't think this is an idiomatic expression unto itself.  (for instance, note that the japanese wikipedia reference above does not bold the characters, it only supplies them to give a literal japanese translation of the english phrase "storm and urge")
=====
as it is a clear construction of 嵐 and 衝動, i don't think this entry is necessary

@@ -14,1 +14,1 @@
-<gloss>storm and stress</gloss>
+<gloss>storm and urge</gloss>

Usage samples:
http://pedalweb.exblog.jp/13524897/
http://ncode.syosetu.com/n8866bb/39/
http://m.facebook.com/events/330757310360184?aref=22
http://www.mental-service.com/gotou/2007/07/post_8.html
Explanation:
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/シュトゥルム・ウント・ドラング
http://www.germany-wine-jiten.com/his/schiller.html

This is apparently an established replacement for 疾風怒濤 in common parlance. :-)

Cross
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/オイラーの等式
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Euler's_identity

JST, Cross
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/オイラーの公式

@@ -11 +11 @@
-<misc>&sl;</misc>
+<misc>&net-sl;</misc>
@@ -13 +13 @@
-<gloss>reply</gloss>
+<gloss>reply (esp. on Twitter)</gloss>

https://twitter.com/Ren_Runa0123/status/1122417435234062336
"⚠️5月になったらリム大会します⚠️

リムる条件

“ 全然絡んでない人”

“フォロバなってない人”
(↑もしいたら)

リプしてくれたら残す”かも”
残す人は残す！

この時だけリプするのなしね？
残してほしいなら絡んで"

@@ -8,0 +9 @@
+<pos>&vs;</pos>

http://detail.chiebukuro.yahoo.co.jp/qa/question_detail/q1044228625
http://netyougo.com/twitter/7582.html

Seems to be usually (if not always) used in relation to Twitter.