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R 2019-07-04 07:05:02 Marcus Richert <...address hidden...>
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A* 2019-07-04 06:57:50 Johan Råde <...address hidden...>
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I agree with Jim |
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A* 2019-07-04 06:11:25 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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I prefer Rene's 2011 version. No problems with "usu.". The season reference is a common
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A* 2019-07-03 13:29:56 Marcus Richert <...address hidden...>
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a Japanese poem in seventeen syllables having a 5-7-5 syllabic form and traditionally containing a reference to the seasons. |
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I remember being told years ago not to do abbreviations like "usu." "oft." outside of notes - that is our style, right?
I tried improve the expl a little because I thought it was a little hard to read. |
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-<gloss g_type="expl">17-mora poem, usu. in 3 lines of 5, 7 and 5 morae</gloss>
+<gloss g_type="expl">seventeen-mora poem usually in the form of 5-7-5 morae with one or several references to the season</gloss> |
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A 2011-09-17 22:20:49 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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(show/hide 2 older log entries)
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A* 2011-09-17 15:49:43 Rene Malenfant <...address hidden...>
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-<gloss>haiku poetry (17-mora poem, usu. in 3 lines of 5, 7 and 5 morae)</gloss>
+<gloss>haiku</gloss>
+<gloss g_type="expl">17-mora poem, usu. in 3 lines of 5, 7 and 5 morae</gloss> |
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A* 2011-09-17 15:49:11 Rene Malenfant <...address hidden...>
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syl -> mora |
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-<gloss>haiku poetry (17-syllable poem usually in 3 lines of 5, 7 and 5 syllables)</gloss>
+<gloss>haiku poetry (17-mora poem, usu. in 3 lines of 5, 7 and 5 morae)</gloss> |