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A 2018-11-28 19:57:29 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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Trimming. |
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@@ -25 +25 @@
-<gloss>basic fare ticket (ticket not valid for rides on limited express trains unless together with a supplemental express ticket)</gloss>
+<gloss>basic fare ticket (not valid on limited express trains without a supplemental express ticket)</gloss> |
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A* 2018-11-28 05:58:22 Marcus Richert <...address hidden...>
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Wordier, but more correct. |
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@@ -25 +25 @@
-<gloss>basic fare ticket (ticket only valid for rides on non-limited express trains)</gloss>
+<gloss>basic fare ticket (ticket not valid for rides on limited express trains unless together with a supplemental express ticket)</gloss> |
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A* 2018-11-28 05:40:13 Marcus Richert <...address hidden...>
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http://www.jreast.co.jp/e/ticket/types.html
http://www.jreast.co.jp/kippu/1201.html |
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@@ -17,0 +18 @@
+<gloss>ticket (for bus, train, etc.)</gloss>
@@ -19,0 +21,5 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<xref type="see" seq="1454760">特急券</xref>
+<gloss>basic fare ticket (ticket only valid for rides on non-limited express trains)</gloss>
+</sense> |