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A 2011-07-29 23:28:56 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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For Japanese food "Japanese-style" is redundant. |
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-<gloss>Japanese-style clear broth soup, with ingredients and garnish floating in and on it</gloss>
+<gloss>clear broth soup, with ingredients and garnish floating in and on it</gloss> |
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A* 2011-07-28 16:11:46 Nils Roland Barth <...address hidden...>
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Add some detail: clear/broth soup and floating ingredients are pretty defining |
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-<gloss>Japanese-style soup</gloss>
+<gloss>Japanese-style clear broth soup, with ingredients and garnish floating in and on it</gloss> |