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A 2024-01-27 20:50:23 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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A* 2024-01-27 12:40:32 Robin Scott <...address hidden...>
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Randoseru
daijr: 小学生が学用品を入れて背中に背負うかばん。 |
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All the kokugos mention "小学生". I don't think the detail about the colours is needed. |
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-<gloss>firm-sided school backpack (often red for girls and black for boys)</gloss>
+<gloss>randoseru</gloss>
+<gloss g_type="expl">firm-sided leather (or synthetic leather) backpack used by elementary school children</gloss> |
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A* 2024-01-27 10:26:47 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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GG5: a school backpack.
中辞典: a (school) satchel (strapped on one's back).
ルミナス: school satchel |
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I feel it is a bit too detailed. Feel free to reject my suggested version. |
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-<gloss>firm-sided backpack made of leather (used by Japanese elementary schoolchildren; often red for girls and black for boys)</gloss>
+<gloss>firm-sided school backpack (often red for girls and black for boys)</gloss> |
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A* 2024-01-27 09:17:57 Stephen Kraus <...address hidden...>
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I guess "etc." was added to represent things like synthetic leather, but I think it's more confusing than helpful.
I think we usually separate multiple notes in parentheses with semicolons. |
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-<gloss>firm-sided backpack made of leather, etc. (used by Japanese elementary schoolchildren, often red for girls and black for boys)</gloss>
+<gloss>firm-sided backpack made of leather (used by Japanese elementary schoolchildren; often red for girls and black for boys)</gloss> |
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A 2011-10-13 05:47:43 Rene Malenfant <...address hidden...>
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simplifying |
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-<gloss>type of school bag (a backpack, knapsack, rucksack, satchel with back straps) used by elementary school students, traditionally leather (often synthetic leather), black for boys, red for girls, with a large flap</gloss>
-<gloss>elementary school bag</gloss>
+<gloss>firm-sided backpack made of leather, etc. (used by Japanese elementary schoolchildren, often red for girls and black for boys)</gloss> |
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A* 2011-10-13 05:36:01 Nils Roland Barth <...address hidden...>
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WP:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Randoseru
http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/ランドセル |
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Clarify that this is a *specific kind* of *elementary school* backpack, not a backpack generally – this is a very specific term for a design that is unfamiliar to most English-speakers (resulting gloss is a bit long).
Also, correct language source to Dutch, as specified on ja & en WP, with many references there. |
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-<s_inf>possibly also nl: ransel</s_inf>
-<lsource xml:lang="ger">Raenzel</lsource>
-<gloss>bag</gloss>
-<gloss>knapsack</gloss>
-<gloss>satchel with back straps</gloss>
+<lsource xml:lang="dut">ransel</lsource>
+<gloss>type of school bag (a backpack, knapsack, rucksack, satchel with back straps) used by elementary school students, traditionally leather (often synthetic leather), black for boys, red for girls, with a large flap</gloss>
+<gloss>elementary school bag</gloss> |