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A 2020-07-12 23:01:46 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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Quiet for a while. May as well close it. |
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A* 2020-07-07 05:00:58 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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Does this work? I felt the full version was rather too long. |
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-<gloss g_type="expl">Heian period comparison game</gloss>
+<gloss g_type="expl">Heian period poetry, paintings, etc. comparison game</gloss> |
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A* 2020-07-07 03:24:15 Marcus Richert <...address hidden...>
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I think this is less helpful and I think examples of a genre should have xrefs to the genre, not the other way around.
I had a hard time imagining what a "comparison game" was until I looked up the detailed descriptions. I think mentioning there's two
players and that there's a judge is helpful. |
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A* 2020-07-07 03:15:07 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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Suggest making it less detailed and instead having xrefs to components. |
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+<xref type="see" seq="1588110">歌合・うたあわせ</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="2835395">絵合わせ・えあわせ・2</xref>
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-<gloss g_type="expl">Heian period comparison game where two sides of contestants presented poetry, paintings, flowers, etc. which were then compared by a judge declaring a winner</gloss>
+<gloss g_type="expl">Heian period comparison game</gloss> |
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A* 2020-07-07 01:36:09 Marcus Richert <...address hidden...>
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daijr:
左右に分かれ物事を比べ合わせて優劣を競う遊戯の総称。歌合わせ・絵合わせなど。
世界大百科事典 第２版の解説
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uta-awase |