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A 2019-08-06 07:22:39 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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Trying to make that long gloss less unwieldy. I don't want "knife" twice in the gloss, and if we are referring to a "nata" I'd like to keep the xref. |
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-<gloss>sturdy broad-bladed knife, used in woodcraft and hunting (tapering like a normal knife, unlike a regular nata)</gloss>
+<xref type="see" seq="2105610">鉈・なた</xref>
+<gloss>sturdy broad-bladed knife, used in woodcraft and hunting (tapered, unlike a regular nata)</gloss> |
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A* 2019-08-05 12:36:43 Alan
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All nata are broad bladed. Tapering to a point, doesn't change that. |
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-<xref type="see" seq="2105610">鉈・なた</xref>
-<gloss>sturdy knife, used in woodcraft and hunting (more tapered than a regular nata)</gloss>
+<gloss>sturdy broad-bladed knife, used in woodcraft and hunting (tapering like a normal knife, unlike a regular nata)</gloss> |
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A 2019-08-05 00:44:22 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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I think this covers it. |
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-<gloss>sturdy tapered knife, used in woodcraft and hunting</gloss>
+<xref type="see" seq="2105610">鉈・なた</xref>
+<gloss>sturdy knife, used in woodcraft and hunting (more tapered than a regular nata)</gloss> |
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A* 2019-08-02 21:06:20 Rene Malenfant <...address hidden...>
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reopen. see comment below suggesting possible changes |
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A 2019-08-02 21:06:04 Rene Malenfant <...address hidden...>
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temp approve. will reopen related to Alan's comment |
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A* 2019-08-01 11:41:47 Alan
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I think tapered knife makes it kinda sound like it's notably more tapered, than a usual knife ...but I'm not sure how exactly to write as a definition it, myself, either.
"nata with a more normal blade profile, tapering to a point" would be accurate and all, but would leave people wondering what a nata is. |
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A* 2019-07-30 05:37:01 Jim Breen <...address hidden...>
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https://www.bepal.net/gear/knife/21942/2
https://takibi.style/7888/
剣鉈 4893 |
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See discussion on 2105610. |