prog, luminous
gg5: いかに生きるべきかをじっくり(と)説いて聞かせる　explain at length [slowly and carefully, deliberately] the right rules for living

I think this works.
I don't think "deliberately" should lead.

@@ -11,0 +12,3 @@
+<gloss>(slowly and) carefully</gloss>
+<gloss>without haste</gloss>
+<gloss>thoroughly</gloss>
@@ -13 +16 @@
-<gloss>carefully</gloss>
+<gloss>closely</gloss>
@@ -15,2 +17,0 @@
-<gloss>thoroughly</gloss>
-<gloss>without rushing</gloss>

However most references have "carefully" without "slowly and". It doesn't have to be slow.

"X and Y" is actually a really helpful way of glossing many adverbs and adjectives. An initial gloss like that puts the reader to the right frame of mind right at the start.

GG5, 中辞典, etc.

Removing repetition. My refs don't support the last 3.

@@ -13 +13 @@
-<gloss>slowly and carefully</gloss>
+<gloss>carefully</gloss>
@@ -17,3 +16,0 @@
-<gloss>perfectly</gloss>
-<gloss>properly</gloss>
-<gloss>well</gloss>

nikk ほかに「亜美利加」「阿米利加」などの表記もあった。


亜米利加	30574	97.7%
亜墨利加	611	2.0%
阿米利加	31	0.1% saw in 1902 book 
亜美利加	69	0.2%

@@ -12,0 +13,8 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>阿米利加</keb>
+<ke_inf>&sK;</ke_inf>
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>亜美利加</keb>
+<ke_inf>&sK;</ke_inf>

@@ -6,0 +7 @@
+<ke_inf>&rK;</ke_inf>
@@ -10,0 +12 @@
+<ke_inf>&rK;</ke_inf>

OK, I'll work on the sentence indices and the xrefs.

daijs: 「アメリカ合衆国」の略。

Definitely the most common name for the US, and アメリカ redirects to アメリカ合衆国 on Wikipedia.

@@ -17,0 +18,2 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1149840">アメリカ合衆国</xref>
+<misc>&abbr;</misc>
@@ -19 +21,4 @@
-<gloss>America</gloss>
+<gloss>(United States of) America</gloss>
+<gloss>United States</gloss>
+<gloss>US</gloss>
+<gloss>USA</gloss>
@@ -24 +29,2 @@
-<gloss>United States of America</gloss>
+<gloss>America (land mass)</gloss>
+<gloss>the Americas</gloss>

Yes, very small no of hits that aren't from EDICT derivatives.

アメリカ杉	975
アメリカスギ	484

I doubt the ateji are ever used here.

@@ -5 +5 @@
-<keb>亜米利加杉</keb>
+<keb>アメリカ杉</keb>
@@ -8,0 +9,4 @@
+</r_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>アメリカスギ</reb>
+<re_nokanji/>

Most hits for this are from EDICT anyway.

@@ -8,1 +8,1 @@
-<reb>あめりかすぎ</reb>
+<reb>アメリカすぎ</reb>

Bulk update: deletion of adj-noBulk update: deletion of adj-no
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -12 +11,0 @@
-<pos>&adj-no;</pos>
@@ -21 +19,0 @@
-<pos>&adj-no;</pos>

Seems OK.

GG5, 広辞苑

clarify that it’s derogatory, and also give former sense as polite (as per 広辞苑, and obvious from etymology; compare 御前, with same development).

I *think* this is male/rough speech, but I’m not sure.

@@ -14,0 +14,10 @@
+<misc>&derog;</misc>
+<gloss>you</gloss>
+<gloss>you bastard</gloss>
+<gloss>you son of a bitch</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&pn;</pos>
+<pos>&adj-no;</pos>
+<misc>&arch;</misc>
+<misc>&pol;</misc>

@@ -22 +22 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="2644910">軟貨</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="2644910">軟貨・2</xref>

@@ -22,1 +22,1 @@
-<xref type="see">軟貨</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="2644910">軟貨</xref>

koj, daij, gg5

@@ -20,0 +20,5 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<xref type="see">軟貨</xref>
+<gloss>hard currency</gloss>
+</sense>

returning xref

@@ -18,0 +18,1 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="2644790">軽さ</xref>

Not really. Something can be jocular without being a colloquialism.

Isn't col implied by joc?

I think the "col" was OK.

@@ -30,0 +31 @@
+<misc>&col;</misc>
@@ -32 +33 @@
-<gloss>husband that is retired and considered a nuisance</gloss>
+<gloss>husband who is retired and considered a nuisance</gloss>

@@ -30,2 +30 @@
-<misc>&col;</misc>
-<misc>&derog;</misc>
+<misc>&joc;</misc>

GG5

@@ -19,0 +20,2 @@
+<gloss>to wheel</gloss>
+<gloss>to trundle</gloss>

大辞泉

@@ -19,0 +20 @@
+<gloss>to drive (a car)</gloss>

koj, daij, gg5, prog

@@ -21,0 +21,17 @@
+<sense>
+<pos>&v5s;</pos>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to turn over</gloss>
+<gloss>to tip over</gloss>
+<gloss>to throw down</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&v5s;</pos>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to leave</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&v5s;</pos>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to buy and sell (quickly for a profit)</gloss>
+</sense>

gg5, chujiten, wisdom

@@ -13,2 +13,3 @@
-<gloss>to visit one place after another without plan or effect</gloss>
-<gloss>to gallivant about</gloss>
+<gloss>to walk about</gloss>
+<gloss>to go out (here and there)</gloss>
+<gloss>to gad about</gloss>

@@ -12,0 +12,1 @@
+<pos>&vi;</pos>
@@ -13,1 +14,1 @@
-<gloss>gallivant about</gloss>
+<gloss>to gallivant about</gloss>

GG5

slight wording change, “gallivant” is precisely the correct technical term

@@ -12,1 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>to visit one place after another without effect</gloss>
+<gloss>to visit one place after another without plan or effect</gloss>
+<gloss>gallivant about</gloss>

koj, daij

@@ -17,0 +17,4 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>かろがろ</reb>
+<re_inf>&ok;</re_inf>
+</r_ele>
@@ -19,0 +23,2 @@
+<pos>&adv;</pos>
+<pos>&vs;</pos>

えんそう doesn't come from Portuguese. Splitting it out.

@@ -28,5 +27,0 @@
-</r_ele>
-<r_ele>
-<reb>えんそう</reb>
-<re_restr>煙草</re_restr>
-<re_restr>烟草</re_restr>

煙草	1278980
莨	19898
烟草	1767
タバコ	4236998
たばこ	1619434

I'd drop it from タバコ. Several refs have 煙草/タバコ.

@@ -20 +19,0 @@
-<re_nokanji/>

Shouldn't たばこ be the form w [nokanji]?

@@ -18,0 +19,5 @@
+<reb>タバコ</reb>
+<re_nokanji/>
+<re_pri>gai1</re_pri>
+</r_ele>
+<r_ele>
@@ -29,5 +33,0 @@
-</r_ele>
-<r_ele>
-<reb>タバコ</reb>
-<re_nokanji/>
-<re_pri>gai1</re_pri>

GG5, etc.

I think 1 sense is enough.

@@ -27,12 +26,0 @@
-<gloss>shrinking back</gloss>
-<gloss>shying away</gloss>
-<gloss>getting cold feet</gloss>
-</sense>
-<sense>
-<pos>&n;</pos>
-<pos>&vs;</pos>
-<pos>&vi;</pos>
-<gloss>to step back</gloss>
-<gloss>to move back</gloss>
-<gloss>to draw back</gloss>
-<gloss>to back away</gloss>

スーパー大辞林
https://dictionary.goo.ne.jp/word/尻込み/#jn-112540

added definition

@@ -20,0 +21,4 @@
+<gloss>hesitation</gloss>
+<gloss>wavering</gloss>
+<gloss>faltering</gloss>
+<gloss>balking</gloss>
@@ -22 +25,0 @@
-<gloss>hesitation</gloss>
@@ -24,0 +28,11 @@
+<gloss>shying away</gloss>
+<gloss>getting cold feet</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<pos>&vs;</pos>
+<pos>&vi;</pos>
+<gloss>to step back</gloss>
+<gloss>to move back</gloss>
+<gloss>to draw back</gloss>
+<gloss>to back away</gloss>

尻込み	73167
後込み	2662
尻ごみ	4332

@@ -8 +8 @@
-<keb>後込み</keb>
+<keb>尻ごみ</keb>
@@ -11 +11,2 @@
-<keb>尻ごみ</keb>
+<keb>後込み</keb>
+<ke_inf>&rK;</ke_inf>
@@ -18,0 +20 @@
+<pos>&vi;</pos>

@@ -9,0 +9,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>尻ごみ</keb>

i submitted a sound correction to jpod101

OK, merging. Kanji and reading sorted on hits.

(I kept this one to keep the comments with the active entry.)

@@ -5,0 +5,3 @@
+<keb>空箱</keb>
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
@@ -7,4 +10,4 @@
-<k_ele>
-<keb>空箱</keb>
-<ke_inf>&io;</ke_inf>
-</k_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>からばこ</reb>
+<re_restr>空箱</re_restr>
+</r_ele>
@@ -16,1 +19,0 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1630430">空箱・からばこ</xref>

my version of daijirin doesn't have あきばこ at all (granted it's outdated).  if 空箱 is really not [io] (according to the "daij" rule), then i agree they should be merged

Daijirin

Daijirin has it this way too. I'm inclined to merge the two entries, with a reading restriction on 空き箱.

koj, daij, gg5

i don't think 'how to swing' is really a noun.  'future plans' is really 身の振り方

@@ -6,0 +6,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>振方</keb>
@@ -13,1 +16,1 @@
-<gloss>how to swing</gloss>
+<gloss>way of swinging</gloss>
@@ -17,1 +20,2 @@
-<gloss>future (life) plans</gloss>
+<xref type="see" seq="2645130">身の振り方</xref>
+<gloss>way of dealing with something</gloss>

GG5

Split out literal sense from metaphorical sense, elab wording

@@ -12,0 +12,1 @@
+<gloss>manner of swinging</gloss>
@@ -13,1 +14,4 @@
-<gloss>future plans</gloss>
+</sense>
+<sense>
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<gloss>future (life) plans</gloss>

When I look at Daijirin via Yomichan I see it gives カリ石鹸 as the main kanji form and adds "カリ石▼鹼" at the end. That ▼ usually signals an old/deprecated form. Possibly the Sakura site drops that bit.

For ref, I got my version here (I don't necessarily endorse this site; it's just where I found some of my dictionaries)
https://learnjapanese.moe/monolingual/#getting-and-using-monolingual-dictionaries

It's named '大辞林３' but it has some newer stuff, like the 2011 earthquake, so maybe it's a dump of デュアル大辞林
https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/大辞林

I also have a スーパー大辞林 epwing but only check it occasionally

The 大辞林 entries shown on the Sakura site use 鹸, but it may be that the site is substituting it for 鹼. Alternatively, it may be using a later edition.

大辞林

大辞林 uses 鹼 instead of 鹸 in its headwords, so I'm gonna add all those (forgive 
me haha luckily there aren't that many)

@@ -8,0 +9,4 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>カリ石鹼</keb>
+<ke_inf>&oK;</ke_inf>

Remove unsupported yoji tag
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -12 +11,0 @@
-<misc>&yoji;</misc>

Kanji Haitani list

Adding yoji tagAdding yoji tag
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -11,0 +12 @@
+<misc>&yoji;</misc>

大辞林、広辞苑

Add “book learning” sense, rearrange;
both big J-J dicts use the wording:
深くない
応用がきかない
…mean both “shallow (superficial)” and “not practical”, which is really captured by “book learning” (closely analogous English term).

@@ -12,0 +12,2 @@
+<gloss>superficial learning</gloss>
+<gloss>book learning</gloss>
@@ -13,1 +15,0 @@
-<gloss>superficial learning</gloss>

Entry created

Added additional dotted reading(s) via batch update.Added additional dotted reading(s) via batch update.
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -13,0 +13,3 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>ショコラ・ショウ</reb>
+</r_ele>

Added additional dotted reading(s) via batch update.Added additional dotted reading(s) via batch update.
-*- via bulkupd.py -*-

@@ -10,0 +10,3 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>ショコラ・ショー</reb>
+</r_ele>

daijs

@@ -4,0 +4,3 @@
+<r_ele>
+<reb>ショコラショー</reb>
+</r_ele>
@@ -9,0 +12,1 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="2223160">ホットチョコレート</xref>

Entry created

Reverso, Eijiro

Almost all matches are on "best friend"

@@ -12,2 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>very best friend</gloss>
-<gloss>extremely close friend</gloss>
+<gloss>best friend</gloss>
+<gloss>very close friend</gloss>

@@ -12,2 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>best friend</gloss>
-<gloss>close friend</gloss>
+<gloss>very best friend</gloss>
+<gloss>extremely close friend</gloss>

http://d.hatena.ne.jp/keyword/���ͧ
JWN

Eijiro

gg5

Eijiro

@@ -15,1 +15,1 @@
-<s_inf>usu. as 軽軽に</s_inf>
+<s_inf>usu. as 軽々に</s_inf>

koj, daij, gg5

nikk, gg5, eij

koj, daij, eij

nikk, meikyo

there's an entry for 重さ.  might as well have this too

koj, daij, eij

daij, gg5

@@ -12,0 +13 @@
+<pos>&vi;</pos>

vt or vi?

@@ -13 +13,2 @@
-<gloss>translocation (genetics)</gloss>
+<field>&genet;</field>
+<gloss>translocation</gloss>

daij, gg5, etc.

koj, gg5, eij

We don't usually have x-refs on arch entries.

@@ -22,2 +21,0 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1440980">転がす・2</xref>
-<xref type="see" seq="1445770">倒す・たおす・1</xref>

@@ -22,3 +22,2 @@
-<xref type="see" seq="1440980">転がす</xref>
-<xref type="see" seq="1445770">倒す・たおす</xref>
-<xref type="see" seq="1593170">転ける</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1440980">転がす・2</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1445770">倒す・たおす・1</xref>

Actually, to be formal, 転ける（こける） is modern, and the 
corresponding archaic form is 転く（こく）, but we don’t have 
an entry for that yet.

daijr

* Correct pos 動サ四 (archaic form)
* Link to modern forms
* Link to [vi] form
BTW, the example sentences are over-eagerly matching;
they are actually matches for 倒す（たおす）.

@@ -20,1 +20,1 @@
-<pos>&v5s;</pos>
+<pos>&v4s;</pos>
@@ -22,0 +22,4 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="1440980">転がす</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1445770">倒す・たおす</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="1593170">転ける</xref>
+<misc>&arch;</misc>

wiki, eij

gg5, eij

@@ -12,1 +12,1 @@
-<xref type="see">軟鑞</xref>
+<xref type="see" seq="2644880">軟鑞</xref>

koj, daij, gg5

koj, daij, gg5

koj, daij, gg5, eij

koj

@@ -6,0 +6,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>軟質硝子</keb>

@@ -8,1 +8,1 @@
-<reb>なんしつがらす</reb>
+<reb>なんしつガラス</reb>

daij, gg5

koj, daij, gg5, eij

daij, gg5, eij

koj, eij

大辞林

@@ -5,0 +6,4 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>軟石鹼</keb>
+<ke_inf>&oK;</ke_inf>

koj, daij, gg5

大辞林

@@ -5,0 +6,4 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>ソーダ石鹼</keb>
+<ke_inf>&oK;</ke_inf>

koj, daij, gg5

koj, daij

nikk, ls, eij

OK

@@ -4,0 +4,3 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>柔らかさ</keb>
+</k_ele>

nikk, japan wordnet

of questionable benefit, but nikk has it so i'll submit.  feel free to reject

koj, gg5, eij

koj, daij, gg5, prog

wiki, eij

daijs

daijs

@@ -11,0 +12 @@
+<lsource xml:lang="eng">bitter chocolate</lsource>

Let's go with that.

http://chocogallery.com/choco_shurui.html
http://real-hot-space-entertainment.com/sweets/8649/
http://www.chocolate-cocoa.com/dictionary/word/chocorate.html#w1_2

These refs suggest that Marcus is right.
They also explain that both ビターチョコレートand スイートチョコレート refer to dark chocolate (i.e. chocolate without milk),
but ビターチョコレート has more cocoa and less sugar than スイートチョコレート

@@ -12,2 +12 @@
-<gloss>bitter chocolate</gloss>
-<gloss>dark chocolate with very little sugar</gloss>
+<gloss>dark chocolate (with high cocoa content)</gloss>

http://real-hot-space-entertainment.com/sweets/8649/
"ブラックチョコレートとビターチョコレートは名前の呼び方の違い
であって、同じものという認識で大丈夫！"
daijs: 明治ブラックチョコレート entry
"株式会社明治が販売するチョコレートの商品名。板状のビターチョ
コレート。"

My issue is that "bitter chocolate" doesn't seem 
commonly used in English as a proper noun phrase (sorry 
if I'm making up terminology here), while it is in 
Japan. What I mean is, in English, "bitter chocolate" 
generally means "chocolate that is bitter". "Bitter" is 
just a descriptor. "Dark chocolate" on the other hand 
doesn't refer to any chocolate that happens to be "dark" 
in color or other qualities but to a specific concept, 
i.e. a chocolate with a high-cacaco content.

I think the best gloss would be just "dark chocolate".

http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/bitter-chocolate  "a type of dark chocolate (= dark brown chocolate made without milk) that has very little sugar"
GG5: "bitter chocolate".

I think I'm with Johan here. I suggest the extra gloss just to flesh it a bit.

@@ -12,2 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>bittersweet chocolate</gloss>
-<gloss>extra dark chocolate</gloss>
+<gloss>bitter chocolate</gloss>
+<gloss>dark chocolate with very little sugar</gloss>

daij

@@ -6,0 +6,3 @@
+</k_ele>
+<k_ele>
+<keb>しびれが切れる</keb>
@@ -13,2 +16,2 @@
-<gloss>go numb</gloss>
-<gloss>have pins and needles</gloss>
+<gloss>to go numb</gloss>
+<gloss>to have pins and needles</gloss>

GG5

G n-grams:

ちり紙交換 6,464 75.8%
チリ紙交換 1,998 23.4%
塵紙交換　    70  0.8%

The JEs all say "toilet paper" and Google Images concurs. Though seems sometimes it can be both (or even other paper products like sticky notes): http://osaka.aipa.or.jp/exchange/.

@@ -4,3 +3,0 @@
-<k_ele>
-<keb>塵紙交換</keb>
-</k_ele>
@@ -12,0 +10,4 @@
+<k_ele>
+<keb>塵紙交換</keb>
+<ke_inf>&rK;</ke_inf>
+</k_ele>
@@ -15,6 +15,0 @@
-<re_restr>塵紙交換</re_restr>
-<re_restr>ちり紙交換</re_restr>
-</r_ele>
-<r_ele>
-<reb>チリがみこうかん</reb>
-<re_restr>チリ紙交換</re_restr>
@@ -24 +19 @@
-<gloss>collecting waste paper (old newspapers etc.) and exchanging them for tissues</gloss>
+<gloss>collecting waste paper (old newspapers, etc.) and exchanging them for toilet paper</gloss>

@@ -15,0 +15,6 @@
+<re_restr>塵紙交換</re_restr>
+<re_restr>ちり紙交換</re_restr>
+</r_ele>
+<r_ele>
+<reb>チリがみこうかん</reb>
+<re_restr>チリ紙交換</re_restr>

大辞林

FWIW, this certainly still exists, though the quantity of tissues received is rather nominal (IME).

ＫＯＤ追加語彙

@@ -17,0 +17,1 @@
+<gloss>metal fitting</gloss>

Widely used in technical/engineering contexts

GG5, WWW pages.

OK, splitting

@@ -10,6 +10,0 @@
-<r_ele>
-<reb>ぷるん</reb>
-</r_ele>
-<r_ele>
-<reb>プルン</reb>
-</r_ele>
@@ -17,0 +11,2 @@
+<pos>&n;</pos>
+<pos>&adj-f;</pos>
@@ -18,0 +14,1 @@
+<xref type="see" seq="2645930">ぷるん</xref>
@@ -19,1 +16,1 @@
-<gloss>jellyish</gloss>
+<gloss>shaking like a jelly</gloss>
@@ -21,1 +18,0 @@
-<gloss>puddingy</gloss>

i can go either way on whether or not they're merged.  i think we're a touch inconsistent on that, but i lean against merging.  i also lean against 'jellyish' and especially 'puddingy'

I wonder about ぷるんぷるん/ぷるん in the same entry. I see we sort-of do it for ごちゃごちゃ;ごっちゃ, but have ずきんずきん and ずきん in different entries.
Possible mergers: のっそり & のそり, and ぽんと/ぽん

GG5

Currently in use at MOS Burger, for instance.

@@ -12 +11,0 @@
-<pos>&adj-no;</pos>

GG5

GG5

eij

Widely used (plenty of Google hits), used in textbook I’m using.

リーダーズ+プラス

英辞郎

koj, daij, eij, gg5

Already an entry (1612690)

koj, daij, gg5

@@ -10,1 +10,2 @@
-<gloss>with a thumping sound</gloss>
+<gloss>whack</gloss>
+<gloss>smack</gloss>

Encountered this word in Takemiya Yuyuko's "Golden Time 1", page 124.  The sentence was "その指先を、ばしっと軽く撃墜。"  A male character had been pointing his finger accusingly at a female character, and she had just cut him off verbally, turning the tables on him.

@@ -12 +12,2 @@
-<gloss>counterattack (kendo, judo, etc.)</gloss>
+<field>&MA;</field>
+<gloss>counterattack</gloss>

gg5

@@ -13,0 +13,1 @@
+<gloss>reversal technique</gloss>

http://dic.yahoo.co.jp/dsearch?enc=UTF-8&p=返し技&dtype=0&dname=0na&stype=0&pagenum=1&index=02919300

daij

switching sense order and simplifying.  verb entries should be in the infinitive

@@ -15,2 +15,2 @@
-<gloss>add a hand to</gloss>
-<gloss>when something (such as an umbrella) is being held with one hand (by self or other), add an additional hand to help support it</gloss>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to hold an additional item in one's hand</gloss>
@@ -20,1 +20,2 @@
-<gloss>add another item to a hand already holding something else (e.g., if holding an umbrella in one hand, also hold a purse or package in that hand)</gloss>
+<pos>&vt;</pos>
+<gloss>to use an additional hand to hold</gloss>

大辞林

Used in 川端’s 「雨傘」 (from 掌の小説), for instance.